Da first shine of DA SUN makes u smile. . . .
Da sweet dream of da night makes u smile. . . .
Da dew on da rose buds in ur valley makes u smile. . . .
Da soothing feel of da first drop on land from clouds makes u smile. . .
Da dance, your first dance of da season of rain drops makes u smile. . . .
Da dance of your heart enjoying da drops makes u smile. . . .
Da hot coffee in da drops wid ma luv as sugar . . N ma thoughts wid tat first sip makes u smile. . . .
Da fragrance of ur ownself after da rain shower makes u smile. . . .
Da pampering of your own self in tat blanket ön ur relax chair . . Missing me soft. . . Makes u smile. . . .
Da thought wid tat missing dream of me being in your arms holding, feeling n hug me tite to feel da lyf makes u smile. . . .
Da stars enjoying wid your moon makes u smile. . .
Da admiration of your eyes. . Da searching of me in your wild makes u smile. . . .
Da feel. . Da touch. . Da whisper of your ownself to make u sleep to embrace da swt dream again makes u smile. . .
. . N me . . Away from u. . Far away from u. . Da vibrations of ur smile. . . makes me smile...
Da sweet dream of da night makes u smile. . . .
Da dew on da rose buds in ur valley makes u smile. . . .
Da soothing feel of da first drop on land from clouds makes u smile. . .
Da dance, your first dance of da season of rain drops makes u smile. . . .
Da dance of your heart enjoying da drops makes u smile. . . .
Da hot coffee in da drops wid ma luv as sugar . . N ma thoughts wid tat first sip makes u smile. . . .
Da fragrance of ur ownself after da rain shower makes u smile. . . .
Da pampering of your own self in tat blanket ön ur relax chair . . Missing me soft. . . Makes u smile. . . .
Da thought wid tat missing dream of me being in your arms holding, feeling n hug me tite to feel da lyf makes u smile. . . .
Da stars enjoying wid your moon makes u smile. . .
Da admiration of your eyes. . Da searching of me in your wild makes u smile. . . .
Da feel. . Da touch. . Da whisper of your ownself to make u sleep to embrace da swt dream again makes u smile. . .
. . N me . . Away from u. . Far away from u. . Da vibrations of ur smile. . . makes me smile...
its just amazing....wow....:)
ReplyDeleteawwww...so beautiful:) it reminded of owlcity's vanilla twilight song. listen to it if u havent already.and i love the way ur blog looks:) just a suggestion: make the color of the text either orange or red:)
ReplyDeleteLove this--it really comes to life! You have a talent for evoking so much with one or two words...very special.
ReplyDelete@ firebird...
ReplyDeletemany thanks for visiting and appreciating... its like an inspiration for me too write...words are like concept when one writes poetry and i do try to get the best imaginative aura out of it...
thanks mam again....
divine hints,
ReplyDeletewell penned.
Happy Potluck!
@ jingle... you are da first person to cot it right,.. thanks for your visit and beautiful comment.
ReplyDeleteSuch beautiful and uplifting imagery throughout lovely
ReplyDelete@mindlovemisery.... thanks for appreciating :)
ReplyDeletedo keep visiting
smile wow!! what else made u smile ...
ReplyDeletemay be loads of comments on ur poetry!! :D
very nice poem...
keep writing & smiling always :)
@ sowmya... you must have heard// i think of you and smile"... here the author tries to convey that the "think" word never comes,... "YOU ARE THERE IN MA WHOLE EXISTENCE"
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