Barish ke mausam me…
Sukhe patte kyun sarsarate hai…???
Koi aahat kyun dastak nahin deti…???
Maiy khaane me paymaane kyun nahin chalakte..???
Sab kuch jaan kar bhi..ye sara jahaan anjaan kyun hai..???
Har pal ko jita main….
Har lamha sanwarta main…
Ye kahan masroof ho gaya….
Ye sare sawaal…
ye sawaal kyun hai…????
...is bar, ye barkha, itna kyun satati hai..???
aa poem vachine ek git yad aavi gayu...
ReplyDeletelagi aaj savan ki phir vo jhadi hai...
-- nice again :)
Is baar hi nahi yaar Barkha hamesha hamein satati hain ;) just kidding...lovely play of words...esp like the selection - beautiful words with deep meaning...keep it up...
ReplyDeleteSukhe patte kyun sarsarate hai…???
ReplyDeleteAmazing.....
very beautiful!:)
ReplyDeleteI really like reading hindi poetry at your space:)
barkha ka mausam aise hi anek sawaal kyun la kar rakh deta hai, jaise hi paani ki boondein zameen ko choomne lagti hain?
ReplyDeleteKuch bhooli bisri yaadein.
Nice read.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
keep the beauty of your poetry alive,
ReplyDeletethanks for the support to us.
welcome sharing any time.
Bahut sundar..I love the concept of rain a lot and words are superlative. If you have time, please check my poem on rain.
ReplyDeletehttp://sarusinghal.blogspot.com/2011/06/few-steps.html
Ek sawal...why do we miss our loved ones in rainy season most, that too in sawan specially??? Any guess....
ReplyDeletehello bhargav ;
ReplyDeletewhy don't u make English translation so that every one can enjoy ur poetry :)
@ preeti,..ha kiak evuj che, thanks for reading :)
ReplyDelete@ Indias No 1 blog,.. :) yup, its always so.. thanks for your visit and word.. :)
@ induravisngj... :) you understood the insight... :) thanks
@ tarunima... :) thanks,...and i like the way you swing words on ur blog
ReplyDelete@ blasphemous .. :) thanks, yup bhuli bisri yadein
@ Jingle .. :) thanks you all
@ Saru Singhal,.. :) thanks for read... will surely visit ur blog jz now.. :)
@ irfanbhai,... usi ka jawab dhoondh raha hoon..
@ sowmya... hey thanks for visiting,.. will do :)
ooh wow...nice 1.
ReplyDeleteooh wonnderfull
ReplyDelete@ chitra, welcome ...thanks for your words.. :)
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