Aksar ye sochta hoon…
Main… ek bita hua kal hoon yaa…
Is pal me jee raha ek lamha
Diwar pe tangi ek khamosh tasveer yaa…
Tere wajood ka ek aaeenna
Tere dil ki sanjidgi yaa..
Tere ehsaas ko sanvarta ek mausam
Teri aahat se muskurati ek subah yaa..
Raat ke saye me khoya ek pehlu
Baris ki boondon me sameti kuch yaadein yaa..
Registan ki dhoop me nakaam sa ek saya
Gujra hua ek hawa ka jhonka yaa..
Tere aanchal ki khusbu
Tere honton ki sikayat yaa..
Tera ekraar…
Aksar ye sochta hoon…
wow...what a feeling you have a perfect rhythm in you Bhargav....up to now this is on top of urs...
ReplyDeleteyou just need to correct certain pronunciations of urdu words here..else it is just perfect.
@ irfanbhai... thanks so much, yup am trying ma best, thank you agian so vry much
ReplyDeleteyes I would agree with Irfan here..this is your best work so far bhargav..and you know what this nasur thing suits you better then ghuzul..so concentrate on this style then others...good going:)
ReplyDelete@mishi... :) thanks for your words...
ReplyDeleteheya..nice one again:)...temme some thing...shouldn't it be aksar,,instead of akshar:P
ReplyDelete@ aakrriitiii ... hiii, yup it has to be like that, am gonna change it right way... :)
ReplyDeleteVery touchy.....
ReplyDelete@ preeti,.. many thanks for visiting.... and for your words... :)
ReplyDeleteEmotional to the core, the words are weaved into a nice rhythm...I liked it :)
ReplyDelete@ AARTI... thanks,... :)
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