Kahin gumnaam rahoon pe firte rahe aaj tak…
Nigaah jo mili aaj to,.. pata chala..
Ki… teri khusbu aaj bhi mehkti hai in sansoon me…
Mausam e ishq ke tevar bade ajib hai aaj…
Bahoon me bhar ke ..sawaal ye kar loon…
Ki … kahaan chupi thi aap…
Rango ki mehfil ab saji hai phir…
Kaun se rang se sajaoon tujhe…
Ki.. har rang fika hai tujhe pe aaj
Muddat bit gai…
Sajaaye tere alfaaz ko…
Ab… phir se likh do apni tamannaoo ko…
Tu jo samne hai..
Labson me kashish nahin phir se aaj…
“Meri raahat e jaan…
Tu jo aaye hai mere majar par…
Ye roahaanee mulaqat…
Jee loon phir se aaj”
Simply nice one :)
ReplyDelete@ preeti... skul ma bhanta bhulkao ne mata pita kahe ke lakho... etle e kai pan lakhva maande,.. mane pan thayu kaik evuj .. ane lakhi nakhyu... aapne gamyu etle thayu ke kaik saru j lakhyu hase...thanks again
ReplyDeleteBhargav its good as usual.bt there is something that I have been noticing in your poems so far..you dont seem to care much about WAZUN ..QAFIYA N RADEEF..its very important you know...trust me if you restrict your verses according to these rules of poetry. it will be much much much better then this..even if its an open poem..azad nazum..still there has to be a link between all the lines...rest is fine..your ideas are always sweet and adorable..jus make sure you fit it according to he rules;-)
ReplyDeletenice read:-)
Labson me kashish nahin phir se aaj
ReplyDeleteKya baat hai, poora haale e dil bayaan aur sukoon bhi paaya.
सुंदर लिखा है, आपा यूनीकोड में में टाइप करें तो शायद ज्यादा बेहतर हो,
ReplyDeleteविवेक जैन vivj2000.blogspot.com
@ mishi... :) thanks mam... nice of you to point out the needs... will surely be taken care of...
ReplyDelete"khata mwaaf kare"
@ Blasphemous Aesthete : thanks bro... its always pleasure to read ur words on ma post... thanks for sharing all ur time.. :)
ReplyDelete@ vivek jain:... welcome vivekji... thank you for sharing that idea... will try for sure... :)
ReplyDeleteKaun se rang se sajaoon tujhe…
ReplyDeleteKi.. har rang fika hai tujhe pe aaj
nice lines.
aapki last 2 poem gujrati me hai chah kar bhi nahi padh paai....