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Saturday, June 25, 2011

... long distance, a phone call"



Read my voices to feel the silence..

Hear my echoes to feel the depth..

View my tears to feel the cloud..

Touch my shadows to feel the distance..

Away from you I veil my living..

Away from you I aloof my wisdom..

Away from you I emit my earth..

Away from you I seal my compassion..

“ ……………………….. “

The game of hide n seek,

The ride of cycles after school,

Those sweet fights for the chocolates

And you’re ever winning arguments…

Those naughty dimples on your cheeks,

The first outing with a strawberry cream

That pink dress of yours

And the very first hand written note...

Your first blush when you turned 18

Others envy and my pride…

“ ……………………… “

A glimpse today,

And the memories erupt…

You left me like a question paper and made me subject…

to answer the proverbs and similes…



“ ---------------------------- “”””””””

Da phone rang, and the same soft voice,

How are you??? My surprise…

Made me felt, yes I still do exist….

Your question to subject (me)….

With tremble voices…do you still love me???

And I said….

Read my voices to feel the silence..

Hear my echoes to feel the depth..

View my tears to feel the cloud..

Touch my shadows to feel the distance..

Away from you I veil my living..

Away from you I aloof my wisdom..

Away from you I emit my earth..

Away from you I seal my compassion..

And I kept the receiver…

































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28 comments:

  1. gayathri vishwanathanJune 25, 2011 at 11:14 PM

    Very nice :)

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  2. AakritiJune 26, 2011 at 8:08 AM

    well this was my first read...loved it to the core...it has a looooot of depth into it..so will read once again.but really.its very unique and different:) kp writing..

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  3. Bhargav BhattJune 26, 2011 at 9:01 AM

    @ gayathri... thanks for visit and words.

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  4. Bhargav BhattJune 26, 2011 at 9:02 AM

    @ aakkrriitiii,... i always spell it wrong...( ur name),.. inspirational comment form a poetess... thanks a toonnee... u really made me blush.. thanks again

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  5. InsigniaJune 27, 2011 at 12:43 PM

    Its deep. I loved it. Only that people are so love lorn these days :)

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  6. Bhargav BhattJune 27, 2011 at 2:45 PM

    @ insignia, welcome and many thanks for visit

    love - needs to be redifined :)

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  7. SprigBlossomsJune 27, 2011 at 10:15 PM

    Its a nicely flowing romantic poem :) Cheers!

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  8. DushJune 27, 2011 at 10:19 PM

    Its deep, pure love!!! I read it like a song; it has a rhythm its own music and very touchy message from the heart!!! Awesome!!!!

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  9. Bhargav BhattJune 28, 2011 at 8:52 AM

    @ sprigblossoms,..

    thanks, yes i agree, it has the flow, of all we feel in love... :)

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  10. Bhargav BhattJune 28, 2011 at 8:54 AM

    @ dush,

    thanks,... when imagination galore, its good to pen it ...

    thanks again for that lovely comment

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  11. AnonymousJune 28, 2011 at 11:16 AM

    Heart touching and what beauty in it. Very well chosen words which lives up to their very expression. So proud of you boy, keep them coming. Read each of your creations and loved it to the zilt! A HI FIVE!

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  12. Bhargav BhattJune 28, 2011 at 11:39 AM

    @ rourkelatoraleighlane..

    many many thanks for A HI FIVE, am just trying to give a voice to my innerself...

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  13. CreativityJune 28, 2011 at 2:18 PM

    Wowww!!!!!!! Speechless.

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  14. Bhargav BhattJune 28, 2011 at 3:13 PM

    @ creativity...

    thanks... :)

    its a feel

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  15. YesJune 30, 2011 at 6:20 AM

    Loved all the echoes in this poem--radiating beyond the words...and so much feeling, a whole world that goes very deep.
    Especially felt the line: "yes, I still do exist"...

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  16. Bhargav BhattJune 30, 2011 at 8:56 AM

    @ firebird..

    manyu many many thanks MAM, for sparing time and visiting...

    your comment made me read the line agian...
    it was really nice of you..

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  17. JingleJuly 4, 2011 at 12:25 AM

    this is mind blowing, you rock.

    enjoy the rally.

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  18. Bhargav BhattJuly 4, 2011 at 9:12 AM

    @ jingle...

    :),.. thanks for visiting and aprreciating :)

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  19. AnonymousJuly 4, 2011 at 10:58 AM

    I agree very beautiful and moving exquisitely done. "Those naughty dimples on your chicks..." Cheeks I believe you meant but this line brings a smile to my face very charming

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  20. Bhargav BhattJuly 4, 2011 at 1:17 PM

    @ mindlovemisery.... hahahaha, yup, thanks, some mistakes are intentional....

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  21. N.S.KirtiJuly 4, 2011 at 4:35 PM

    really touching words Bhargav. loved the way you repeated the first two paragraphs at the end. it was like i was looking into the very soul of the poem. excellent. :)

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  22. N.S.KirtiJuly 4, 2011 at 4:41 PM

    really touching poem Bhargav. loved the way you repeated the first two para at the end. brought life and meaning to it. excellent!

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  23. AnonymousJuly 5, 2011 at 2:57 AM

    Sweet, love story. True romantic at heart(sometimes), I have lapped it all up.
    Happy Rally!

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  24. Bhargav BhattJuly 5, 2011 at 9:05 AM

    @ kirti,... thanks for visiting and appreciating, yup (two para) that's the heart of the whole joruney.. :)

    @ clariice.. thanks for visiting,...

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  25. AnonymousJuly 6, 2011 at 2:43 AM

    Wow. The repeating of the end at the start is so very powerful. I hope that I can someday find a love I can have the right, if not the time to say that reapetition. Truly beautiful.
    The Lonely Recluse.

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  26. Bhargav BhattJuly 6, 2011 at 8:52 AM

    @lonelyrecluse..... thats the heart of whole theme... :)
    God bless you and my all wishes for you to find that right one,..
    hey.. when i started blogging you were the one to comment first on one of ma post .(msafro)
    thanks again...

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  27. The PoetJuly 8, 2011 at 8:10 AM

    Hello.
    This is indeed a powerful tale of love.
    Love knows no distance or boundaries.
    Love is mightier than the sword.

    Beautifully expressed.

    Thank you for sharing.

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  28. Bhargav BhattJuly 8, 2011 at 2:24 PM

    @ andy... thanks ANDY... LOVE is jz awesome feel,.. u can never ever describe it in any form..."it has jz to be felt"

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